Improvements made after peer and self assesment (cover)

Improvements made after peer/self assessment

This is my second rough cut of my magazine cover that I sent around the class asking for feedback. As previously mentioned I received a number of comments mainly relating back to the fonts used, which had not yet been altered to suit the image of my magazine anyway. After taking the comments into consideration I made changes based on the feedback resulting in another rough cut design. I then printed out my newly made rough cut design and assessed it myself jotting improvements I could make just to give me visual aid while I was working on the computer.

This is my second rough cut that the class gave me feedback on:

This is the rough cut after improvements based on self and peer assessment:

Elle