Improvements made after peer and self assesment (contents)

Improvements after self/peer assessment

This is my second rough cut of my contents page that I have printed and asked the class to write some comments on the back of my sheet so I could improve. I made some changes to the page using the feedback I was given from the class in order to make my magazine accessible to my target audience of young adults. I then printed out a copy for myself to analyse and note improvements on to get my contents page to the best standard it can be. I mainly started by drawing black lines that I then added to make the layout clearer and shifting them so they were in the correct proportion to everything else on the page ensuring they were the same distance apart from the image/text box on either side of them. I also altered images in size and distance from the black separator lines and the bleed line at the side of the page to ensure the distance was even.

This is my contents page that I sent around to my class:

This is my contents page after making the changes from the class and improving myself:

Elle