Improvements made after peer and self assesment (double page spread)

Improvements after peer/self assessment

This is my second rough cut of my double page spread that I have printed and I asked the class to write some comments on the back of my sheet so I could improve. I made some changes to the spread using the feedback I was given from the class in order to make my magazine more conventional and appealing to the eye. I then printed out a copy for myself to analyse and note improvements on to get my contents page to the best standard it can be. I played around with the colours of the title. I also added various images to the bottom of the spread to fill the white space and give the article more of a fuller look. I also added a drop[ capital and a break out quote to make it look more professional.

Elle